Monday, May 7, 2007

Sorrow

Emotions in this world are many,
and one of them is in plenty,
It's the one that seeps deep inside,
through time it does in you reside,
That one powerful feeling is sorrow,
saddens your soul, keeps you hollow

Every single place in the world,
everyone, be it young or old,
Sleeps with a sorrow in his heart,
of something he hasn't got

A lost son, a daughter in pain,
a bitter rivalry with nothing to gain,
Lives are lost and lives taken,
fighting over pieces of paper

Greed and revenge ruin our souls,
heart turning black as coal,
Love lost in the deep recesses,
fear and anger begins to surface

People find an excuse to go to war,
satisfying their greed for more power,
Entire cities begin to vanish,
callously termed as collateral damage

Life loses it's meaning, no one cries,
as a mother wathes her only son die,
a daughter raped infront of her eyes,
Will we ever be satisfied ?

Be it poor or rich, old or young,
a deep sorrow haunts everyone,
Painfully entwined with our soul,
boring in it a deep hole

One often wishes for it to liberate,
and let go of that absorbing hate,
To feel pure and holy again,
to heal the excruciating pain

In that hope we love and give,
without malice, gain, or any motive,
For a smile on the face of that orphaned child,
to rid yourself of that sorrow, if only for a while....

7 comments:

Shweta said...

Excellent work. Impressive. Good job. Really appreciate it. Keep it up... wait to hear more from u

Adhiraj said...

no rhymes in some parts of the poem.....nice thoughts anyway....have you decided upon a tune yet?

Himanshu said...

Superb dude.... The way you have highlighted the vanity present in humans that's eating them like a parasite to make them the most unsocial 'social ANIMALS'.

Angad said...

last two lines just rocked!!!
nice work pal!!!

Divya said...

Really good ............i wud say best outta all of them ......keep up d gud wrk .......

vandy_k_88 said...

hmmm...intense...u talk about pain n sorrow in a lot of places in the other poems too....wonder..wonder...btw,had no idea u were into poetry

deeksha said...

The poems that u write
are.......
oh...so nice
wish u keep writing
lovely poems
throughout your life
Be an inspiration to G.next
wid ur lovely poems ahead..
You've shared the reality
of life
expressing thru words
that r so rite....
I owe u a thanks for the
world u xposed me to
Keep writing more
keep goin wid d flow...
& let d world know that u've
got smthng in YOU.......